Thread:Aldo The Fox/@comment-32550405-20191028001354/@comment-3036372-20191028012927

Alterations were done with consent on the server, I asked before undoing and explained why I thought they changes were not ideal, leaving big chunks of storylink in the middle of the text, leftovers from link clean ups and did not follow grammar rules for paragraphs.

I got the note saying the older version was flawed, I'd like to ask what were the flaws so I can avoid repeating.