Thread:Linksow/@comment-32550405-20191027235132/@comment-32550405-20191028190006

What you had before:

Horobi attacks A.I.M.S.'s laboratory alongside Jin and Little Assassin. Yua tries to interfere but the assassin transform into the Dodo Magia again and fights her while Horobi orders Jin to hack into the Gigars. In the meantime, Horobi infiltrates the arsenal and finds the mass produced |A.I.M.S. ShotRisers and Attache Shotguns, remarking on it being an impressive feat. He finds the new Attache Arrow and takes it with him alongside an Attache Shotgun. With everything he needed Horobi prepares to leave the laboratory but Valkyrie asks why he is hacking into the HumaGears, to which Horobi says it is the will of the Ark. He gives Jin the Attache Arrow, leading to Valkyrie's defeat.

Back at Daybreak Town Horobi comments on their forces already being enough but that they need to create more Magias to revive the Ark.

Horobi uses the hacked Gigars to assault a datacenter in order to hack into previously unhackeable HumaGears when Aruto Hiden, Isamu Fuwa and Yua Yaiba arrive. They question why he is doing that since the HumaGear are helping save humans, prompting Horobi to remove his head adornment and show his broken earpiece as he reveals himself to be a HumaGear. Proclaiming that he is attacking humanity per judgement of the Ark, which sentenced humanity to extinction, Horobi declares the HumaGears will inherit the earth after they are gone, that being the will of MetsubouJinrai.net.

As the hospital's HumaGear staff are transformed into Trilobite Magias Horobi orders Little Assassin to once again target Zero-One and observes their fight, recovering the Dodo Zetsumerise Key after his defeat.

Horobi comes to the battlefield himself as Vulcan and Valkyrie fight Jin, proclaiming MetsubouJinrai.net's victory as the day of revolution. Using the MetsubouJinrai ForceRiser and the Sting Scorpion Progrise Key he transform into Kamen Rider Horobi, inciting Jin's amusement and Fuwa's rage as the latter recognizes him from the video regarding the truth of the Daybreak Town Accident.

Horobi fights an angered Vulcan but easily outclasses him. Saying that he doesn't care for the effects of the accident, Horobi is hit by Vulcan's Punching Blast but is undamaged. Revealing the Strong Hercules Progrise Key and using the Attache Arrow to unleash a finisher, Horobi renders Vulcan unable to fight back. Telling the Rider to take his last breath, Horobi hits Vulcan head on with the Sting Dystopia, knocking the Rider out of his transformation in a big explosion and leaving him severely injured and in need of an emergency surgery.

There's too many breaks, repeated links, and if left like that it would leave a great big mess. If the character's role in an episode is short, then it shouldn't be left as a paragraph if it's just one sentence, at least add it to the previous or next paragraph.