Thread:Nbajammer/@comment-1352718-20140526054832/@comment-691135-20140526202917

Id probably split that at "Later, she appears in..." because those two are close together. The part at "After a dicussion between Kaito and Mai.." could probably be elaborated on a bit more to pad it a little. Perhaps including Mai's reaction to what she was told, or how she reacted towards Kaito. But that many in one paragraph is a bit much.